tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4785607060280258591.post6785002677908608947..comments2023-07-08T04:56:31.254-07:00Comments on Cilla: MatingCillahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04638827854071004743noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4785607060280258591.post-38058249954453953422009-04-05T22:32:00.000-07:002009-04-05T22:32:00.000-07:00thank you IHM :-)thank you IHM :-)Cillahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04638827854071004743noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4785607060280258591.post-7825251261016687362009-04-04T09:46:00.000-07:002009-04-04T09:46:00.000-07:00You are good!!!!!!!!Powerful and a punch in the gu...You are good!!!!!!!!<BR/><BR/>Powerful and a punch in the gut is how I would describe it too...Indian Home Makerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10649133480442907582noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4785607060280258591.post-59357580206095557292009-04-02T22:57:00.000-07:002009-04-02T22:57:00.000-07:00used the word 'lover' for an effect...for the iron...used the word 'lover' for an effect...for the irony...and number 2 even I had my doubts...will find out more about the grammar thereCillahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04638827854071004743noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4785607060280258591.post-12558180313306164532009-04-02T06:19:00.000-07:002009-04-02T06:19:00.000-07:00powerful. good puch in the guts. a POV, though (i'...powerful. good puch in the guts. <BR/><BR/>a POV, though (i'm rather full of those, i'm afraid)<BR/><BR/>1) the lover+husband line might be crisper if you just used one of the words. whichever. <BR/>2) finishing and slobbering don't seem 'together' to my ear. "finished"?feddabonnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08365326300429832990noreply@blogger.com